After getting some input from classmates, I made some changes to my storyboard and finished it. I had to take a screen shot of it because Illustrator on my computer was quitting every time I attempted to save the file as a jpeg. I will replace the image with one that is of a higher quality once I get to class and can use the Kresge computers!
I really like the transitions that you created with the yellow. Again, I wonder if there is something more creative with the way you bring in your sentences.
ReplyDelete—lo-res is hard to read but I made out as much as I can
ReplyDelete—when screen goes yellow, maybe leave it there and reveal the def. on the yellow. you can copy this "zooming" in action with the next def. too…what if "stretch" from your sentence stretches and gets larger at the same time then you are back to the green color?
—between frame 16 and 17…maybe the "stretch" from that sentence rotes and becomes the vertical stretch in frame 17 rather than just having that one show up.
—be careful of too many moments where there is just text on the screen with nothing happening to too long.
—maybe the first sentence should read "It is important to stretch your legs before running" just to relate it to the second sentence even more.
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