This blog was made for STA 467: Time and Motion Design (a class I am taking at Michigan State) It was set up as a way to share ideas, videos and projects with our professor and classmates throughout the semester.
Sunday, October 30, 2011
Updated Storyboard
with some adjustments needed I'm sure.. here is my most recent and somewhat final storyboard. I wasn't sure what to do with images towards the end. I was losing inspiration so I'll take any suggestions or ideas to help spice it up!
Your notes are very descriptive and clear great job! Your compostitions really catch my attention and I want to know what's going to happen next. I also like the colors that you used and the crooked-ness maintained throughout the entire story. Your story is definitely unique I like how you created a story looking from a bigger picture. The only thing I would say is to maybe have some of your text come in large before landing on the stage because I could see that being really effective for the more bold statements. (the ninth frame or the second to last frame) Another thing you could do is bring in some background color or squares of color when it's just white, but I don't think it's always necessary. Maybe you could put color in the background whenever images come in overlapped so they can separate across a plane.
Woah Gina, this is really good. Your notes are clear and I didn't even want to read them because I could already picture what the type&image were doing with movement. I was a little curious on how the frames transition from one to another, you were clear on a few of them but I am guessing the rest just fade to white and then the next frame comes in? I was having some trouble with frame transitions on mine. The story in relation to type is very straight forward and literal, but I like it like that. I guess you couldn't really 'mess up' the order because it all kind of is in the same category. For me, the unexpected moment was the realization that you are totally right; "the real price never appears on the menu". That was a bold piece of information and I like how you put it in that sturdy green box. Your typeface choices totally work with your theme. The whole storyboard has a very clean feel to it, and I like how you kept the background white, it reflects the white fridge you have a pic of. I don't really have any helpful criticism because everything is perfect already! You may want to add a few more sounds in toward the end; maybe there you could try to 'mess it up' a little bit by having a misleading sound that doesn't match up with the image& text. I love how in the beginning you have the type chopped, so cute. Great job!
Your notes are very descriptive and clear great job!
ReplyDeleteYour compostitions really catch my attention and I want to know what's going to happen next. I also like the colors that you used and the crooked-ness maintained throughout the entire story. Your story is definitely unique I like how you created a story looking from a bigger picture. The only thing I would say is to maybe have some of your text come in large before landing on the stage because I could see that being really effective for the more bold statements. (the ninth frame or the second to last frame) Another thing you could do is bring in some background color or squares of color when it's just white, but I don't think it's always necessary. Maybe you could put color in the background whenever images come in overlapped so they can separate across a plane.
Woah Gina, this is really good. Your notes are clear and I didn't even want to read them because I could already picture what the type&image were doing with movement. I was a little curious on how the frames transition from one to another, you were clear on a few of them but I am guessing the rest just fade to white and then the next frame comes in? I was having some trouble with frame transitions on mine.
ReplyDeleteThe story in relation to type is very straight forward and literal, but I like it like that. I guess you couldn't really 'mess up' the order because it all kind of is in the same category.
For me, the unexpected moment was the realization that you are totally right; "the real price never appears on the menu". That was a bold piece of information and I like how you put it in that sturdy green box. Your typeface choices totally work with your theme. The whole storyboard has a very clean feel to it, and I like how you kept the background white, it reflects the white fridge you have a pic of. I don't really have any helpful criticism because everything is perfect already! You may want to add a few more sounds in toward the end; maybe there you could try to 'mess it up' a little bit by having a misleading sound that doesn't match up with the image& text. I love how in the beginning you have the type chopped, so cute. Great job!